The Two Young Saviors

The Two Young  Saviors

Chapter 1 Getting bullied
There was a village. The village had a bunch of gold. That village never thought that gold was very precious, they just thought that it was a random thing that they could buy things with. Although, the people in the village kept on bullying this small boy named Lucas.They kept on bullying Lucas because he never spoke up.  And all that time he wasn’t speaking but he was thinking of a plan. He was thinking of a plan to destroy invaders that wanted to steal stuff from them and take over the village. He was the only one in the village to think that gold was precious thing. No one knew what he was doing. They just kept on saying that he was dumb that’s why he didn’t talk. He wasn’t talking because he couldn’t lose concentration. It was a very hard plan. Many days went by, he kept on getting bullied but he didn’t care he would just ignore them and keep thinking. And even if there was the best thing going on and he wanted to tell someone he wouldn’t because he couldn’t lose concentration. And plus if the invaders got their gold then they would be in big big trouble. But nobody would think of that. They just thought that the village was a very peacefull place. Even though there were no guards, no armor, and no shields or weapons. The villagers still thought the village was very safe.




Chapter 2 the invaders                  
Then one day, There was a big army coming to attack the village. Mostly because of all the gold they had. It was the time that Lucas thought would come. At first he was nervous but then he realized he could use plan Z. It was the hardest most life risking plan, but he didn’t want to leave the village. He just thought to himself “ I can do this.”And plus he would never leave his family that poor. So then all of the villagers got scared and ran away because they thought the army was very big. Except for Lucas. This was Lucas’s time to make the invaders go away. So instead of going back he just stayed where he was. Everyone cried for the Lucas to come back, “ they said come back Lucas!” but he didn’t listen he just said “ I've got this”. His parents got so scared they ran for him. But he just said “ I’m never going to leave my village”.  He knew that the big army was going so fast they couldn’t control themselves. So before they reached the village Lucas built a trench and then the big army didn’t jump off in time because that wasn’t what their commander said. So they couldn’t reach and they were too afraid to attack again. The commander sent in the air attackers. But when they dropped the bombs Lucas used a net to catch the bombs and launch them into the sea. Then the commander sent the gun army but Lucas made a really high wall. So then the commander sent in all the armies together! This time Lucas had nothing in his mind to do except for one thing. To make all of the things he already made together! So he made a bunch of nets and by a bunch of nets and by a bunch of nets he really did make a bunch of nets , the running army couldn’t jump far enough and the bombs got launched into the sea, and the walls stopped the gun army! The villagers were amazed they were so scared that some of them fainted . Then when the villagers who fainted came to. Lucas immediately became very famous from that day onwards. The villagers promised not to bully him ever again.  The villagers rewarded Lucas and then his parents hugged him amazed and proud. Then they had a big feast. It had everything Lucas liked. And mostly dessert. The small boy had to admit he loved the dessert. He loves everything junky. Then from that day on everyone in the village remembered him. They remembered him with all their heart. He got married and got one child. He was known as the saviour of the whole entire village. He was their only hero. Then one day he passed away. They remembered him and they told stories of him fighting off those meanies.

Chapter 3 the new cruel invaders           
One day that same very village saw some invaders coming to attack them. They had ships filled with swords.  And now that the Lucas had died they didn’t have anyone to save them! “What are we going to do”!? Cried one villager.  “I don’t know!” cried another. The villagers screamed! They called the king and told him about the invasion. The king came right over to come and surrender, he said “please take all our gold and spare us” but the invaders actually wanted to kill all the villagers first and then take the gold. They all got scared. He said that he is going to kill the most noble person first. Then the villagers said the king was the most noble person. And the king had to admit that he was the most noble person. He was a noble person to himself and the village. So he lied down so the invader could cut him in half.  
                                          Chapter 4 the great rescue
   
When the king of the invaders was about slice the king ... a small boy named George came and threw a big rock at the invaders sword to break it. Then the invader said “ who do you think you are “ “I am a villager who doesn’t want you to kill everyone” said George in a rather calm voice. “Then I shall kill you first” said the invader. The invader took out a spare sword. “Okay”  said George in a calm voice. Then before the invader killed him he snatched the sword and sliced him in half ! Then most of the of the invaders got scared and ran away. The rest just tried to be brave and wish for the best they could get. Some of them fell to the ground and prayed to god. They tried to fight but the George dodged all of the swords. And when the army was about to kill the king, George rebuilt the trench in the nick of time while the army was running. Then the army fell into the trench. Except for one. He had nothing but a rock he had  picked up from the village then the whole village picked up a rock and threw it at him. The invader tried to throw his rock but his plan was a total backfire. The invader wished he got better aim. The invader ran away from the rocks and was about to pick up another one. But then the George took the rock he was going to take and smashed in his face! By this the, invader ran away for dear life. They were all laughing by the look of his face when he was running away. The invader had a crooked face that looked pretty funny for him. The invader was offended. He tried to ignore them but he couldn’t. He just kept on saying I don’t look weird. He went back and told the army what happened. And they started laughing really hard. They laughed so hard that their faces almost turned into what his face looked like.       
                                     
                                        Chapter 5 the reward       
The villagers clapped and cheered for George. Then the king asked “what or who inspired you to do this.” “ The story that my parents told me about with Lucas.” The king almost knew that he would say that.  He would say that because he was the best bravest person in the world. (other than god) They had a great feast with loads of desert. Then they told stories of both of the brave children. Many many days by. The boy got very old. He got married and had 2 children. Then one day George got very sick he was in a lot of pain. George died like Lucas. He died at the same age as Lucas. The believed that they could be related in a way. Since they both saved the village and they both died  at the same age. They remembered him as a true warrior. They told stories of him and Lucas. A few people who were born after him didn’t believe the stories And thought that their grandparents and parents were just crazy. They would remember him for ever.
              
                       
                   
     
                                       Chapter 6 the apologizing  

Then when many days went by, the invaders decided to apologize the villagers for invading them. So they went right to the king and said “sorry”. Then when the invaders were about to leave the king suggested they could get together and have a little bit of a nice time. The king didn’t want them to think pity of themselves. So they got together and they played board games and  they talked and stuff. They had a nice and feast. The feast had most of the things that they had in the party with George and Lucas. Which obviously was sweets. Like brownies, cakes and stuff like that. Then the invaders left. When they reached their village they didn’t think pity of themselves. They all had a nice time. Then the villagers and the invaders lived happily ever after. And they lived happily ever after.  

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